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Each line set up in a row
One by one the blood shall flow
Streaming down this broken soul's wrist
Claim's it's better than settling scores with a fist

Why must this angel do such harm?
Friends and family are alarmed
Though, they don't care enough to ask if she's fine
They think all she does is whine

She will not fight
As death will claim her brow tonight
It is by her hand, her knife
Passing on to the afterlife

Hell's warm flames greet her
Then everything goes out in a blur
Wakes up to people around her in a hospital bed
Tears come to her eyes, she had wished to be dead

"They don't even care
All they do is fake despair
They never took notice before
They all know I'll do it some more

And I know what I need
Next time though, I shall succeed"
Nothing to say, really... Wrote this last night as I was crying and unable to sleep... :/
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Blissfull-Thinking Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sorry. I woke up crying at 4am
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BloodRose19000 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist
Why? D:
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Blissfull-Thinking Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cause of things
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BloodRose19000 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist
:/
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Blissfull-Thinking Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its fine
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ThisMechaJunkie Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know how that feels...
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thpointofnoreturn Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
:huggle: please don't kill yourself..
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BloodRose19000 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist
Thank you for your concern :hug: But I won't... Honestly, I've never cut... I've "scratched" myself with a blade before, but never bled, but it was enough that it scabbed over... I'm not suicidal at the moment, so I do not plan on killing myself as of now. Besides, I could never do that to my boyfriend and best friends... Now that I actually have people who care.

As the description said, I just wrote it as I was crying and unable to sleep last night. So yeah. I was just miserable and kinda wrote this... :s
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thpointofnoreturn Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
same here

I thought maybe it was like that because it seems like something I would do (write a poem like that) but just wanted to be sure :heart:
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